Rewrites every visitor-facing string that used an em dash, choosing the
punctuation for what the dash was doing: a colon before a list or
explanation, a comma for an aside, a full stop between two thoughts,
parentheses for an aside mid-sentence. Covers page titles and meta
descriptions, the home and admissions guide copy, school page headings
and notes, the compare page, metric labels and tooltips.
Two rewrites also fix the sentence around them: the closure banner no
longer repeats "proposed for closure", and the cut-off caveat's list of
priorities now parses.
A lone dash marking a missing value in a table cell stays: it is a data
convention, not prose. A Jest guard walks the source with the TypeScript
parser and fails on any other em dash in a string or JSX text node.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
The homepage made four statements that were not true, carried elements that
asked nothing of anyone, and had a hero illustration that broke in both the
places it had to work.
Claims, all verified against the code or the API:
* "24,000+ schools" (three places) against a real 27,230. The fact box meant
to show the live figure rendered its own fallback on every request, because
DataInfoResponse declared a `total_schools` field the API has never sent —
it sends `unique_schools`. The fetch succeeded; only that field was
undefined, so nothing threw and nothing failed. The interface, not the
code, was the thing that was wrong.
* "Up to three schools side by side" against MAX_SCHOOLS = 5, contradicting a
card 400px below it that correctly said five.
* "Class sizes" — data the codebase has never held. That copy line was the
only hit in a full-repo grep.
* Invented results and Ofsted grades attributed to two real, named schools
in the compare preview.
Also one feature, three words: Compare (nav), shortlist (footer), pin (cards).
Settled on Compare everywhere. And <title> was the bare string "Home".
Cut: the trust line (repeated the coverage figure one paragraph after the hero
gave it, behind three decorative dots), the "Start exploring" row (three links
to two destinations already in the nav), the six-row coverage table, and three
of the four countdown cards — which gave the page's largest numeral to dates up
to 245 days away, two of them offer days, which cannot be missed. All four
dates remain, at proportionate weight. Value-prop titles drop from <h2> to <p>;
they were outranking the page's real headings in the document outline.
Rhythm: the gaps between the seven landing bands were 24/32/24/16/48/32/16px,
each band setting its own margin, with four different section-header
treatments between them. The page container now owns one gap, and there is one
header pattern. An e2e test asserts the gaps are identical.
Illustration: it kept a fixed light palette in both themes, which left a pale
sky slab as the brightest object on a near-black page, out-shouting the H1 and
the search box. It now reads from --ill-* tokens with a dark re-grade. And the
hero slot ranges from 1.34:1 to 4.9:1 across breakpoints, which no single
composition survives under `slice` — at 860x176 a 540x520 scene shows only its
bottom 110 units, so the schoolhouse was cropped away entirely on phones,
leaving hills and a pin pointing at nothing. There are now two compositions,
each drawn against the crop window its own breakpoint produces, with CSS
showing one. Both are static server-rendered SVG.
The deadline bar renders on the server rather than on hydrate. The effect-based
version needed a reserved height, and one guessed number cannot cover a block
whose supporting line wraps differently at every width — measured, it was short
at all four, shifting the page up to 108px on a phone.
Verified on the built output through an offline render harness (no local
server): real compiled CSS, real rendered markup, four widths, both themes.
tsc clean, 159/159 unit tests, build green.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
The selective-school registration and faith-school SIF warnings were
added as prose in the criteria steps, where they read as ordinary
sentences and were easy to skim past. Pulled them into structured
callout boxes with an amber "note" treatment (using the page's own
gold accent tokens), a warning glyph, and a bold lead-in — so the two
deadlines parents most often miss actually stand out.
- Added a `callouts` field to Step; render as a callout group between
the body and the tool link (both primary and secondary timelines).
- Reverted the warning text back out of the step bodies so it isn't
duplicated.
Verified with tsc --noEmit and next build.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_0146VHeLAWjDVE2B5uU67jCB
Follow-up audit of the rankings and admissions pages.
Admissions (AdmissionsView.tsx):
- National Offer Day no longer claims offers publish "from 12:01 am";
release times are set per-council (often late afternoon, some
overnight), so it now tells parents to check their council's page.
- Secondary preference count no longer states a flat "up to six"
(that's London/Pan-London); most LAs allow three to six. Mirrors the
hedge the primary step already used.
- Added the two deadlines that most often catch parents out: selective
schools' separate entrance-test registration (months earlier), and
faith schools' supplementary information form sent direct to the
school. Covered in both the primary and secondary criteria steps.
- Reworded the equal-preference tip so it's precise: order is the
tie-break among schools you qualify for (you get the highest-ranked
one), not irrelevant.
Rankings (RankingsView.tsx):
- Subtitle "Top-performing schools by X" -> "Schools ranked by X", so
it isn't nonsensical for context/equity/absence metrics.
- KS2 progress isn't published for 2023/24 or 2024/25 (no KS1
baseline). Selecting a primary progress metric on a recent year used
to dead-end on a generic "No rankings found". Added a scoped caveat
to the progress hint and an explanatory empty-state (primary only —
secondary Progress 8 is published).
Added an admissions smoke journey (static content, stable milestones).
Verified with tsc --noEmit and next build.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_0146VHeLAWjDVE2B5uU67jCB
Add a per-step link on the primary and secondary admissions timelines
pointing to the relevant SchoolCompare tool (search, compare shortlist,
rankings) for that stage — from researching criteria through offer day
and appeals.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Rail pins alongside the content with scroll-spy highlighting the current
section (Primary, Secondary, Tips). Collapses to a sticky top pill bar
on narrow screens. Primary section now precedes Secondary.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 <noreply@anthropic.com>
- New /admissions route with AdmissionsView client component
- Live countdowns (days until) to Primary/Secondary deadlines and Offer Days
- Step-by-step timelines for both tracks with highlighted milestone rows
- Tips section covering equal preference rule, late applications, waiting lists
- Homepage countdown strip (4 cards) between discovery chips and how-it-works
- Admissions nav link and footer link added
Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>